Final Post!

Voki

         Hey guys, I found another website to give you last information about my novel, and finish my homework. I made this, but the voice belongs to Paulo. Hope you guys enjoy! It is two parts, because I could not make all of them in one part. I will write down the parts above the videos. You will not be able to follow me after this post, because my book is finished. If I gave you enjoyable time to spend by following me, I am very happy. Thank you!

      

            Part 1                                                                                    Part 2

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Rewriting the Scene

       Greetings followers, good news! I finished my book, and I am going to do funny activities, for my this post. Hope you guys enjoy!  First, let me tell the original final scene, so you can see my imagination, and learn more about the book. If you want, you can also rewrite and send me, so we can talk about that book.

       As you know, last post I did prezi and wrote the timeline. Raven falls in love with Alexander. One day, she think about all the strange things, creepy man, gothic guy,Trevor, everything. She can't believe, that Alexander is a vampire. She goes to the mansion, that they live in. She finds like it was, and all the beauties were gone, even the mercedes. The book ends with her disappointment. Now it's time for new end!

      Raven is in her bed, and text messaging with Trevor, talking about the mistakes they have done each other, and a strange thing happens. Trevor apologies, and goes to Raven's home. Raven doesn't want to go outside, but she sees Trevor in a sad motion, then she goes. Suddenly Trevor catches her and throw her in the car, and immediately drive outside the town. All in a sudden a creature attacks to car, and kill Trevor. Suddenly takes Raven and bites, Raven doesn't understand anything and she became a vampire, then she realizes that the creature is Alexander.

Wordle

      Followers! I found a website, I pasted a book review, and it gave me the words that are used in the book. The bigger ones are more oftenly used, and the little ones are less oftenly used. I did this to show you the book with words, and I wanted to do a different book. I choose this black color, because Raven's favourite color is black, and when I heard the word "Vampire" the color in my mind is black, and red. They live in darkness, and they drink blood, thoose thing's colors are red and black. Hope you guys enjoyed, see you for my next post!

http://openbooksociety.com/article/ellen-schrieber-vampire-kisses/ my book review.

Post 4

    Greetings followers! I have  a different thing for you guys today. I learned a website called prezi, and I did a timeline of this check-in. I will write the link, so you can learn something new about my book. Hope you guys enjoy!

http://prezi.com/vce8vxlnl60p/vampire-kisses/

Post 3

Compare and Contrast

       Hi guys, this blog is a little bit late. Sorry about that, but I was sick, and I am better now. Today I am going to do compare and contrast with my previous book, "The Warrior Heir." Let's get started! 

       Let me tell a few information about my previous book. It was fiction book, and it was about wizards and warriors. There was a boy called Jack, he was different them all, he was a wizard, but someone changed him to    a warrior, and they kidnap him to use for tournament. In tournament, there are two sides. One of them is Red Rose, one of them is White Rose. Two warriors fight for their side, but one of them dies. The winner side become the master of the council. Jack fights against his girlfriend, and he doesn't want to do that, and he prefer to die. Suddenly his girlfriend saves her, and they live happily forever.
      I think that Raven, and Jack are similar with one thing. According to my check-in number 4 "Jack is hurt by a magical dagger, and aunt Linda, Leaneder Hastings, also the woman in the curch thinks that he is going to die, but he doesn't die."(Altun Literary Luminary) I think Jack is also fighter, because he never give up like Raven. Raven wants to take revenge from Trevor according to Vampire Kisses, "Raven thinks that they are going to go to the Matt's party and they will crash Trevor." (page 18) Trevor makes fun of Raven, and Becky but Raven doesn't give up trying to shut Trevor up. Then she finds a way to do that, like Jack in The Warrior Heir, trying to run away from wizards and Dr. Longbranch.
     
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      I talked about similarty between Jack, and Raven. Now I am going to talk about differences between them. There are a lot of differences, because they are not in the same situations, and they are the characters of different authors. I think the biggest problem is being popular. Raven is a lonely girl with one friend called Becky. "I have only one friend in Dullsville, a farm girl, Becky Miller." (page 9) Raven, and Becky are lonely two characters. They both have one friend, but Jack is a handsome boy, and handsome boys have girlfriends and at least two close boy friends to hang out. Jack have two friends, one of them is Fitch, one of them is Will, and they always want to help Jack to figure out the problems. According to my mid novel quit, I wrote a quote on that paper, "We're wondering about you, you are not online nights anymore. Do you want to share with us?" (pages 183,184) Will and Fitch says that to Jack, and that shows the relationship between Jack and his friends. His friends care about Jack, and they like Jack. That shows Jack is an important person, but Raven is not. Thank you for reading my post, if you want to learn more, follow my new posts!

    

My Favourite Scene

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My Favourite Scene

    On my last post, I told that Raven takes her revenge from Trevor, Do you want to know what happenned after that? Actually my favourite scene is that. Let me tell you about it.

      After Raven took Trevor's clothes, she immediately left his house, and after that day in Dullsville people talks about Trevor. In book it says like this, "The story of Naked Trevor spread immediately through Dullsville High." (Schreiber 42). In school a lot of students laughed out loud to Trevor, and they started calling him as "Naked Trevor". Whenever a student pass Raven, they giggle. I think that is a brave thing, because not all people could do that thing. I also think that Trevor will never mock Raven again, because everyone will blame Trevor, because people would take revenge if they are scorned like that. Trevor should make a good plan to take his revenge, but I don't think he is smart enough to make a good plan, if he is smart, he wouldn't let Raven go inside in the house. I don't think Trevor will stop trying to revenge from Raven because in the book he says "I'll kick your ass, Monster" (Schreiber 43).  The events in my book goes strange and it is really funny, and I advice everyone to read it. It tells about a gothic girl's teenage life, and I enjoy while reading it, hope that this book has more than 1. Like 2, or 3 more book I can read, because I loved it. I think that, the author is very good writer, because she is really good at making her readers excited. When I read this book I always wondering about what will happen next, and can't stop reading once I start. Follow my new posts to learn about "Vampire Kisses" more.

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Vampire Kisses by Ellen Schreiber

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Vampire Kisses by Ellen Schreiber

       Hi I am reading a book called Vampire Kisses in literature circle class. I think this book is so strange, and I just started it. Hope this is going to be fun. If you follow my new blogs you can have some information about my book.
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Summary

   This book is written in first person point of view. The main character is Raven, and she says she wants to be a vampire when the teacher asks in kindergarten, what the students want to be in the future. Raven loves gothic style and she is a fan of Anne Rice, who is a gothic writer. Raven meets a friend called Becky after school. Becky invites Raven in their house, and that was the first time that someone invites Raven in their house. Raven lives in a town with her family. She has a brother and she calls him 'Nerd Boy' and she thinks that they are very different that they shouldn't be sister or brother. Raven calls their town as Dullsville, because the town is so boring.

     One day they go to a vacation with their family, to a city. Raven is so excited to meet with Anne Rice, and she doesn't care about anything except Anne Rice. When that time came, Raven feels amazing, and she sees Anne Rice.

     There is a haunted house in town, and Raven doesn't scares from anything and she thinks that she can go there and enjoy that place, because everyone in the town scares from that place except Raven. One night she goes there and sees some guys hanging out and one of them is about to go in the house and proof that he is brave and the other boys would accept him, but Raven realizes that he scares a lot and she helps him to go in there and gives her necklace to proof that he went inside the house.

Song that Raven listenes and why?

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-6Xl9tBWt54

    This song is gothic style and Raven loves gothic, and that should be the one reason that she listenes this song. In this video clip there is a girl and she loves gothic and she goes highschool (at least it looks like she goes to highschool and she is like 16 years old like Raven.) and she is alone, nobody cares about her, and everone looks her in a bad way. She has piece of paper and there are some pictures on it about a hard rock group. Once in a while the door explodes and the group comes in the physical education class and starts to sing, and play the song. Everybody she hates die, and turns to a monster.(a gothic monster :)