Post 5
Rewriting the Scene
Greetings followers, good news! I finished my book, and I am going to do funny activities, for my this post. Hope you guys enjoy! First, let me tell the original final scene, so you can see my imagination, and learn more about the book. If you want, you can also rewrite and send me, so we can talk about that book.
As you know, last post I did prezi and wrote the timeline. Raven falls in love with Alexander. One day, she think about all the strange things, creepy man, gothic guy,Trevor, everything. She can't believe, that Alexander is a vampire. She goes to the mansion, that they live in. She finds like it was, and all the beauties were gone, even the mercedes. The book ends with her disappointment. Now it's time for new end!
Raven is in her bed, and text messaging with Trevor, talking about the mistakes they have done each other, and a strange thing happens. Trevor apologies, and goes to Raven's home. Raven doesn't want to go outside, but she sees Trevor in a sad motion, then she goes. Suddenly Trevor catches her and throw her in the car, and immediately drive outside the town. All in a sudden a creature attacks to car, and kill Trevor. Suddenly takes Raven and bites, Raven doesn't understand anything and she became a vampire, then she realizes that the creature is Alexander.
Wordle
Followers! I found a website, I pasted a book review, and it gave me the words that are used in the book. The bigger ones are more oftenly used, and the little ones are less oftenly used. I did this to show you the book with words, and I wanted to do a different book. I choose this black color, because Raven's favourite color is black, and when I heard the word "Vampire" the color in my mind is black, and red. They live in darkness, and they drink blood, thoose thing's colors are red and black. Hope you guys enjoyed, see you for my next post!
Hi Uğurcan, I am writing this comment because I liked your wordle very much because your colors fit your book very good.I tried to use good colors like you and the other thing that I like is your wordle's shape it is like vampire's teeth, I couldnt find shape like this but I used good colors to show the shape.Your words fits good to because important things are big and small things are less important.I also liked your background's color, and if you dont mind, I would like to ask you a question, In worlde relationship is big so is your book is like twilight is there any love between vampire and human ? see you.
ReplyDeleteHi Uğurcan! It is good that you finished your book on time and post your last work. I think you wrote it really short. Your points will get lower because of that. You need to write more and explain your new ending but I love your wordle a lot. It is symbolizes your book. You use red and black mostly and it represents vampires. Did you enjoy your book while you were reading? I am really curious about it.
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